Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

The extinction of creatures and loss of bio-diversity are affected by human activities

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the global ecosystem. There are various reasons for

this

, but measures could be taken to tackle

this

problem.There are several explanations for the human activities have negative effects on the population of species and bio-diversity on the world’s ecosystem.

Firstly

, overhunting wild

animals

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significantly all over the world.

This

is because

hunters

and companies earn huge

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amount of money from trading wild

animals

’ body

part

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, meat and feathers,

hunters

will poach wild

animals

such

as bears, crocodiles and rhinos as much as possible.

Secondly

, humans dump numerous

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amount of

plastic

waste

on the oceans.

This

is largely detrimental for marine

animals

which thought

plastic

waste

is like their food,

then

they will die because they cannot digest

plastic

waste

like

plastic

containers and

plastic

bottles.

For example

, according to a survey by Vietnam express in 2020 in Nha Trang, 5% of the population of turtles decreased per year because they ate

plastic

containers which floated on the surface of the Nha Trang sea. In order to address

this

issue, governments should take a few steps. One might be to impose strict laws on

hunters

and organizations who hunt wild

animals

for trading and producing purposes. By doing

this

,

hunters

and organizations will have to decline the poaching

animals

which lives in forests and safaris. Another sensible approach is that governments should have programmes to enhance people’s awareness about

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effects of

plastic

waste

on marine creatures.

As a result

, people will have actions that are more environmentally friendly than before

such

as reducing, recycling and reusing

plastic

waste

or collecting

plastic

rubbish in the ocean regularly. In conclusion, there are a number of species and biodiversity are being on the brink of extinction because of the influences of humans on the global ecosystem.

However

,

this

problem will be less likely to happen if governments impose strict rules on

hunters

and companies and organize projects to raise the publics’ perception.