Some people think that art lessons, such as painting and drawing lessons, should be compulsory in secondary schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Art
subjects
should be taught to every student in high school. I strongly oppose this
view because these subjects
are not the subject everyone keens to learn about, and there are also
students
who are afraid of studying these kinds of subjects
.
Being forced to learn some lessons that the pupils do not have an interest in, obviously, will have some effects on them. It can make them hate everything about art
if they have to draw or paint something every week. Moreover
, some students
will feel that they do not obtain any knowledge and it will even make them feel that they are wasting time. For example
, in my experience, I did not have any interest in those subjects
but I had to study about them, since they were compulsory subjects
, and the consequence from this
was I cannot remember any content I learnt.
In addition
, some pupils are scared of studying about art
subject, due to the method of evaluation. Most of the time, teachers will grade students
by their art
performance. The pupils who are not an expert on these subjects
, such
as drawing, will not be able to cope with some situations. When their teachers make a criticism about their own works and the teachers may show their works to the other students
or even make fun of them, so it would be better for the students
to have a choice to choose what subject they desire to learn.
In conclusion, I believe that the students
do not have to study about art
lessons, as there are some students
who do not want to know how to do art
, and there are also
some people who do not have the courage to study about it.Submitted by Bussara.bb2804 on
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