The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009

We can see that,in 1959,

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percentage of people went to their office on foot,at 55%,

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cent of people reached their destination on foot. The most prominent feature is that one in ten

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of people used cars in 1959,

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number trebled between 1959 and 2009,

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for 35%.Usage of trains maintained the same proportions in both years,at 15%.Bus

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users decreased

from 15

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in 1959 to 13

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in 2009.Other means of transport were less important in 1959,with only 5

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,but

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reached

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12% in 2009. Meanwhile,

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distance and duration stood at

35Km

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35 km

and 17 minutes in 1959.

However

,these features increased dramatically over the years,accounting for 19 km and 42 minutes in 2009.