Many people believe that high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems, and how could they be reduced?

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and more

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films

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that

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what they watch on tv and internet.

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like youtube that time they do not watch

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one is that some rules of

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like

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are helpful for reducing the

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that

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of violent films can be successfully addressed, provided that the

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measures are taken.