Both governments and individuals are spending vast amounts of money protecting animals and their habitat. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?

It is irrefutable that everyone needs to work for the betterment of humankind at the same time we
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saved species living on
this
planet. Predominantly certain people thaughts that states need to spend money to improve poor
life
, on the other ,handsome section of society saves animal lives. ,
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I am in favour of the improvement of
life
as well as protective creatures and governing body should take some measurement steps. Apparently, human beings are the most vital resources for any society to run,
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not everyone are having the same resources and expenditure. So
first
and foremost the ruler sections duty need to define the law or their activity to make a better
life
for surrounding people.
Secondly
, the destitute family required really some supports to survive if the breadwinner from the family become sick or some mishappening
then
all dependent suffer. Most of the malnutrition cases were reported in very poor condition people.
Thirdly
, more criminal cases have been seen in lowlife, Yes ,in fact, a recent survey conducted by BBC has shown that number of crime rates or criminal involvement happening in lower
life
or those who
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degradable
life
because of scarcity. On the other side, wildlife
life
is in danger due to the imprudent behaviour of humans, due to a large number of smuggling involved in
this
. Some of the breeds being used for making and testing medicines like rats while some make for decorative
such
as elephant teeth are expensive than some diamonds. A national geographics report says that around 70% of fish and some creatures are endangered
also
if
this
continues by end of 2040 most of them will disappear. To summarize, the rulers need to work for the betterment of individuals
life
by making rules or providing subsidies, reservations, free education, and jobs.
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to ,
this
they need to make strict norms and authoritative bodies to save the animals
life
.
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will be the real betow for the living world and livable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem services
  • ethical imperative
  • conservation
  • natural habitats
  • interconnectedness
  • preclude
  • false dichotomy
  • holistic approaches
  • sustainable development
  • environmental stewardship
  • social welfare
  • poverty alleviation
  • eco-tourism
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