Both governments and individuals are spending vast amounts of money protecting animals and their habitat. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care. To what extent do you agree?

It is irrefutable that everyone needs to work for the betterment of humankind at the same time we

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, on the other ,handsome section of society saves animal lives. ,

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I am in favour of the improvement of

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as well as protective creatures and governing body should take some measurement steps. Apparently, human beings are the most vital resources for any society to run,

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not everyone are having the same resources and expenditure. So

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and foremost the ruler sections duty need to define the law or their activity to make a better

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for surrounding people.

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, the destitute family required really some supports to survive if the breadwinner from the family become sick or some mishappening

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all dependent suffer. Most of the malnutrition cases were reported in very poor condition people.

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degradable

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because of scarcity. On the other side, wildlife

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is in danger due to the imprudent behaviour of humans, due to a large number of smuggling involved in

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as elephant teeth are expensive than some diamonds. A national geographics report says that around 70% of fish and some creatures are endangered

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continues by end of 2040 most of them will disappear. To summarize, the rulers need to work for the betterment of individuals

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by making rules or providing subsidies, reservations, free education, and jobs.

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they need to make strict norms and authoritative bodies to save the animals

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will be the real betow for the living world and livable.