water was used in four different countries, do you agree with it?

Given are a pie
chart
and a bar
chart
illustrating how
water
was used in four different countries in the new millennium. In summary,
agriculture
accounts for the majority
for
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the
water
use of the whole world and some countries. In the pie
chart
, the world mainly uses
water
for
agriculture
in 2000, 70% of
water
is used for
agriculture
.
Industry
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is the
second
large
water
used category with 22%, which is around one-
third
of
agriculture
’s, while domestic only contributes 8%. In the bar
chart
,
agriculture
contributes
for
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the most
for
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water
use in India, which is 92%,
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with
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China and New Zealand, with 69% and 44% respectively.
In contrast
, Canada uses most of the
water
for
industry
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the industry
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in 2000, with 80%, while domestic and
agriculture
only accounted for 12% and 8% in turn.
Moreover
, the other three countries, India, China and New Zealand only contribute 3%, 22% and 10% of the
water
use
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for industry respectively.
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