Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies.to what extent do you think are consumers influenced by the advertisement? what are the measures can be taken to protect them?

In recent times ,most of the
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feel irritation by
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amount of commercials from marketing companies. I personally believe that consumers have
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impact
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the different types of adverts,
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some points can be considered to shield them . My opinion
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are seen in
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paragraphs. The
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and foremost reason behind consumers have influenced on advertisement is that
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because of the informational aspects of the products which, is related about size, appearance , colour , how to use it gives information to consumers to buy
this
product
or not.
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, another reason is that some advertisement gives transformational
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individuals mind .
For instance
, if some advertisement is taken by a well-known celebrity
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perspective ,by seeing others celebrity use
this
product
some of the people
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thought
taught
that they should
also
buy
this
product
.
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, some of the solutions can be taken for
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one is government should make some laws or policies regarding
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types of adverts.
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they should
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monitored
some commercials like if it is harmful
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youngsters
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example, Alcohol beverages related.
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some individuals
also
have to take some steps by searching the
product
reviews on internet or else they should
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the ingredients the products contain as well as by seeing some
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videos
about the
product
which they think to buy,
therefore
they may get an idea that of
such
product
is reliable to buy or not . In conclusion , I think that end-users are influenced by
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of advertisements due to informational aspects ,
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some steps should be taken by them to protect themselves from any harmful contains.
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