Medical services should be run by profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Health
care matters is a very imperative sector
however
some individual
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individuals
urgued
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argued
urged
health
services
should be managed by companies that are up for business.As far as am concerned i
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this
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these
services
will be very expensive and there will be conflict
of interest between Add an article
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patient
and the facility.
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the patient
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,services
would be very costly for a low income
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low-income
patient
to seek services
from this
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these
thus
the mortelity
rate will be very high in the community as people will seek Correct your spelling
mortality
services
from other unreable
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unreliable
such
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.Fix the agreement mistake
herbalists
For example
,in 2020 it was reported that in the nation
newspaper that 80% of Replace the word
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kenyans
patients with insurance visit private Change the capitalization
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hospital
despite representing Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
very
small number in the country.Add an article
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a very
Therefore
, it is prudent health
sector
be affordable to the public,this
is because it is a basic need.
Secondly
,there is conflict
of interest between patients and the facility Add an article
a conflict
the conflict
such
that patient
needs will be taken into depending on what a patient
can afford.In addition
,the facility will put more effort in
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profit
rather than taking care of the Add an article
a profit
patient
such
that patient
will only receive full Correct article usage
the patient
services
depending on what he/she can afford.For example
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treament
due to inadequate resources.Correct your spelling
treatment
Therefore
, it is indispensable not to have profit making
company run Add a hyphen
profit-making
health
sector
as patient
needs will not be met.
To sum up,patient
needs will definitely be met with affordable health
sector
however
with health
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the health
sector
being run by profit making
companies and Add a hyphen
profit-making
this
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