In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, youngsters often follow the
news
on social media
rather than in the newspapers or TV
. I firmly believe it has happened because social media
are more handy and comfortable to use. This
essay will examine the causes of this
and give some suggestions before conducting a reasonable conclusion.
To start with, the two main reasons are the availability and accessibility of social media
compared to the press and the TV
. Many social media
, such
as youtube, cover a tremendous amount of news
, and young generations often have these applications on their smartphones. So, their smartphone is always handy, and they have access to them anytime and everywhere. But to provide the newspapers they have to go out and purchase it whether it remains or not, and they can follow the news
on the TV
only at an exact scheduled time. For example
, the news
is only broadcast at nine o'clock in the evening, if a young individual were not at a place that has the TV
, he would miss the news
.
There are some solutions for that to persuade the youth to watch the news
on the TV
or in the newspaper. The director of the news
program could invite some specialists, so adolescents prefer to see the discussion that would be broadcast on the TV
. Secondly
, the news
program could be repeated one hour later, for instance
. If young people are aware programs are available, they will manage their time to see them. For buying the newspaper, publishers could add an extra magazine, as a gift to persuade people to purchase the paper.
To conclude, young generations prefer to follow the news
from the media
that are more accessible and available. This
has occurred because they can watch or listen to the news
whenever they want to. The publishers and the TVdirectors might take some steps to appeal to the paper and TV
programs for the youngsters.Submitted by anahidrr on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite