Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

One of the most considerable subjects that the world is facing today is global warming. The primary causes of

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phenomenon are

greenhouse

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the greenhouse

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effect and deforestation. To tackle these problems the government should use renewable

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instead

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of non-renewable

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and

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reduces

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deforestation. Indeed two major causes of global warming are burning fossil fuels and deforestation. Coal and oil are different types of fossil fuels which are widely used. Combustion of these two

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sources produces large amounts of carbon dioxide,

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the presence of high levels of

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toxic gas In the atmosphere leads to

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heat on the

earth

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earth's

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surface.

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is called

greenhouse

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the greenhouse

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effect. Another reason is

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the destruction of

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the forests By both the government and

people

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the people

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. The result of

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is that the earth’s temperature is rising, so it contributes to global warming.

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example

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Brazil has the highest rate among countries,

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consequently

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it faced a sharp rise in temperature. The most viable solutions are

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more renewable

energy

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and plant more trees to regenerate jungles.

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the government should build solar panels and turbines to get

energy

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from solar power and wind. By using

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method greenhouse gases will no longer be produced.

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they ought to

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trees but

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process must be repeated continuously. Of

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there should be harsh penalties for those who cut down the trees.

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instance

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in

Switzerland

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the fine for cutting down a tree is $1000. In conclusion, if the whole world participates together,

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dilemma could be solved as soon as possible. Global warming

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apply

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threatens the lives of all beings,

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we must work

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each other to protect our planet.