Global warming is one of the most serious issue that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can government s and individuals take to tackle the issues?
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of the affairs that the world is involved with is Global warming. Use synonyms
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, the problematic reasons are food and deforestation, Linking Words
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governments should Add a comma
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change
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people should follow the new regulations.
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emission
caused by food production.The process of modern Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
food stuffs
manufacturing that requires fertilizers has become a new way to accommodate foodchains since human beings Correct your spelling
foodstuffs
life style
changed. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
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, each year rice releases too much Methane Linking Words
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equivalent to the air traffic does. The rise in consumption of meat as a wealth product leads to more factory farming and industrial activities. Linking Words
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vital cause is cutting the forests down. Trees that are cut emit the carbon they have been storing, which is converted to urban use to have Linking Words
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Carbondioxide
to linger in the atmosphere that makes a layer Correct your spelling
Carbon dioxide
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will trap radiation from the sun and you see the result by heat.
What is expected from politicians is to Correct pronoun usage
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change
some rules, and act in a way that let others Use synonyms
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trust them. If they invest Change the verb form
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modifying the industries, it will be a trigger for others. So they will be inspired and try to Change preposition
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change
their technology. Use synonyms
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of them is Use synonyms
carbon
capture system that may need a team to work on, and Correct article usage
a carbon
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a budget that factories can not undertake lonely. Another useful approach is regrowing the lands that are Linking Words
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. If they enforce a law that forces people to pay Correct your spelling
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for destructing the lands, they will never continue Correct your spelling
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, it should be a limitation in Linking Words
nourishment
of animals Add an article
the nourishment
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humans will Linking Words
change
their lifestyle and eat less meat so there is no need to replace jungles with a feeding resource for cows or other species. The result is Use synonyms
less
emissions and dry places won't get dryer or the wet ones won't get water.
In conclusion, the foods people choose to have in their meals and Change the quantifier
fewer
also
ruining the forests to make lands or buildings are the most important causes of global warming, and if governments address the society to Linking Words
change
their lifestyle and Use synonyms
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spend some money on modifying some manufacturing systems will help to Linking Words
change
the situation of the Earth.Use synonyms
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