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Many people are copying celebrities from magazines and on TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a good idea to copy celebrities?

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Dear Mike, How are you ,buddy? I hope you are doing well. I am pleased that you have decided to make a new challenge and will go on a camping holiday. Regarding your trip, it will be a challenging one and you will be pleased because
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 trip will broaden your horizons and a new experience will be added to you through trying new ways of living and you will see
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life from a different angle. I know there will be some drawbacks, but do not make them confuse you and think in a positive way all the time. You will face some troubles with food and sleeping in the dark in a
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 unsecure place, but it will be a memorable experience. I wish if I could go with you, it would be a perfect company, but I won't be able to because of the exams that I have
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 week. Don't forget to take your anti-allergy tablets with you as there will be a lot of insects in there. I'm looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Send me a letter with all details of your trip. Best wishes, Hussein Amin
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