Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected personal relationships? Has this become a positive or negative development?
Nowadays,
technology
has huge effects on people
livings and relationships. While there are some advantages to this
trend, I believe that the advantages are far more.
On the one hand, many commentators are of the view that there are disadvantages to technology
and its effects on relationships. From their point of view, one problem is that people
are made lazy with technology
because the apps and the media are making everything easier. For example
, you don't
need to visit your friend, instead
, you make a video call. Or you could order anything you want within apps when you are sitting on your couch. Hence
, the relationships are behind a tiny screen and you can't
feel the emotions and feelings for real. As the second
drawback, technology
has filled most of the people
's time in a day with the examples we talked about above.
On the other hand
, there are those who subscribe to the view that technology
has several benefits. Firstly
, technology
has made communication between people
around the world much easier. In the past we couldn't
speak with a Korean friend ,for example
, to discuss new ideas easily but now people
can share ideas internationally no matter where they are. Especially it's a loving and important tool for parents whose children have immigrated to another country. Another positive point is learning. People
's knowledge is wider and deeper compared to the past as a result
of technology
. For example
, if you like watercolour painting, you can search through the internet and find lots of content about it and learn, or even join online classes.
In conclusion, Although
technology
might have some drawbacks, we should accept that we can't
escape from it and we should use all its benefits in our life in order to make it better.Submitted by raziye_ranjbar on
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