Prisons is the best punishment for criminals.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion
Jail is the suitable payback for the accused persons.In my opinion,
this
is the correct decision even though some others partially disagree.We will discuss as detailed this
topic in the following paragraphs.
First
and foremost,all across the world, the judiciary fined the guilty people rather than give freedom since it helps to reduce crime ratios and can understand to categorise the jailed members as per their criminal background.Moreover
, this
system gives a warning to the
society and its forces to step back from the activity if someone tries to do bad things.Correct article usage
apply
For instance
,In Rwanda,the president who has enforced a law in 2005 to reduce the offence because the thieves
and looters were increased due to the lack of a proper system,but after Correct quantifier usage
number of thieves
this
implementation reported files has been reducing since
Change preposition
apply
then
.Secondly
, many countries treat the offence man in different ways as the act differ
from each other while, some countries do not take serious action against even the constitution is strict on the paper.
Change the verb form
differs
On the other hand
, a certain group of communities has not been as serious about such
rules even they are the concerned authority to punish because of the corruptions
.several nations are not safe for ladies and kids to travel in wee hours and at Fix the agreement mistake
corruption
the
night since the rapers and kidnappers are very high in numbers on these lands.Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, human trafficking is one of the major threats on earth and there are many gangs working actively because of attain
an enormous level of income indirectly.These things have been happening since the methods are not strict in those places and the authorities are allowed silently to do Change the verb form
attaining
this
after getting some rewards illegally from the confessed men or women.For example
, Nigeria is one of the main corrupted countries in the world in terms of such
bad thing
occurring to ladies and children Fix the agreement mistake
things
also
most of the government staffs
Fix the agreement mistake
staff
earning
money from the underworld team to allow them to continuity.
In conclusion,we have discussed both sides in Wrong verb form
earn
this
essay but in my ,opionion
all are must treat as Correct your spelling
opinion
equal
in legislation so should give proper punishment to anyone who involved in a cruel situation.Replace the word
equals
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