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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

#people #time #loss #species #plants #animals
Recently, the concerns about environmental issues increase because of their direct effect
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 all of our life aspects. While some believe that
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 of specific kinds of trees and
animals
 are the most effective
reasons
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, I personally think they are by no means the most dangerous one. It must be
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admitted that
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 the
diffeciency
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deficiency
 or even
extenction
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extinction
 of some types of animal or
plants
 plays an important role in the environmental concerns.
Animals
 and
plants
 are very important in both lifecycle and food chains. And to illustrate more, in the past there was a
counthry
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country
 who decided to kill all the Tigers and wolves to let the rabbits live peacefully,
as a
result
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 the rabbits ate all of the
harvest
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therefore
 we must keep the balance between the lives of all
animals
 and
plants
.
On the other hand
, there are a variety of problems more dangerous and hazardous. Two of the biggest of these threats are air and
water
pollution
. Starting with
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pollution
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caused by gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from cars, leading to
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 the CO 2 which have it is devastating effects on the planet. Moving to
water
pollution
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a
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 main result
from
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 the improper ways of waste disposal by humans and industries in the rivers and oceans.
This
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 it is turn
make
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 the
water
 fills with chemicals
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 evaporate and make the chemical rains that affect
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all of the earth. In conclusion, no one can deny that
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the extinction
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 of special types of
animals
 and
plants
 make a problem but it seems to be secondary
issues
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 when it comes to air and
water
pollution
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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