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Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable.

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Some
people
 are of the opinion that technological advancements have made the public more sociable whereas some think the social gap is widening due to
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rampant use of technologies. The below essay will discuss both sides of the coin before arriving at a logical conclusion.
To begin
 with, current modern techniques helps the masses to be more socially active nowadays. Social media has played a crucial role in
people
 being socially active, as we can share, view and express our feelings for our kith and kins, dear ones and friends through the network of likes Facebook, Instagram or WhatsApp.we can get instant information on whereabouts or occasions.
for instance
 nowadays It's common to create social groups on what Sapp and share their information, views and know bouts there. Communications can happen easily despite the distances are. Instances like marriages, birthdays, and promotions can be easily notified by media and
hence
 helping
people
 stay connected and socially active. On these platform greeting and views can be easily shared among other group members. On the other ,hand social gaps are increasing nowadays due to the widespread use of modern networks which
although
 connects, but distant physical connectivities.masses connected with each other and occasionally meet. The isolation is getting widened the social gap and despite
people
 having achieved
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 they feel social loneliness. In the past
people
 used to go to their neighbours, relatives and spent time there, embracing and chatting for hours but nowadays
such
 things are uncommon. In
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 I would say that on the one side modern technologies help us to connect twenty-four seven and enhance our connectivity, on the other side it's widening the physical gap of meeting in physical which resulted in psychological isolation of peoples.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online marketplaces
  • mobile payment options
  • personalized advertising
  • accessibility
  • compare prices
  • decision fatigue
  • impulse buying
  • financial imprudence
  • privacy and data security
  • transformed
  • streamlined
  • user-friendly
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