People should follow the customs and traditions when they start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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must be

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obedient to accept the rules and

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taxes

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if migrate to

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another nation.I strongly agree with

this

point and will discuss

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detalied

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detailed

in the following paragraphs.

First

and foremost,nowadays,many families are trying to move

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their

life to another region

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because

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of a better lifestyle and job since it is mandatory to be the part accept of the concerned law of

such

lands.

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,the communities are very much aware

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the importance of

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a new theory and culture of

the

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another region before

to change

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location

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the location

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for immigration.

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,in India,several societies have been trying to move to Canada even though,the expense is higher in all

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comapre

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compare

with India, it's

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because

they know about the benefits

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by the government to the

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newcomers

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new comers

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and the enormous job

oportunities

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opportunities

.

Secondly

,the new admission must behave

himselves

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themselves

himself

and respect other systems which are following since born

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otherwise

,it may cause to

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evict

the migrant from their area

also

the authorities should not give any kind of

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advantages

advantage

to their families.

Thirdly

, if not ready to opt the changes it cause to isolate the concerned person and who

cann't

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can't

run a business or a family-life there

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,most of the groups are ready to obtain the new challenges if reached a new

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civilization

.

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,

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certain numbers

are think

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that it is not

neccessory

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necessary

to accept

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fresh regulations and devotes since it

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give any merits for them.

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,some of them

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to start

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a protest

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protest

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against the methods and beliefs

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not implement on them

by

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forcefully while

,

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want to stay there.

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,some terrorist groups like to build their business in

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place but

not

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agreeable to pay the tax and

also

not be a follower of the living place legislation. In conclusion, I strongly agreed with

this

topic since the benefits

are surpass

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the negative.I

suggesting

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that stay in own place rather than to move another destination if not capable to adapt new constitution.