These day, people in many cities know little about their neighbors and do not have a sense of community. What do you think are the causes and what solution can you suggest?
Nowadays, urban dwellers do not participate in communal living and do not know about
people
around them. Correct article usage
the people
This
is typically city dwellers' lifestyle; some are quite comfortable with it. However
, there are so many factors that contribute to this
kind of behaviour, such
as, busy lifestyles and sense
of insecurities, which could be Correct article usage
a sense
be
remedied by Remove the redundancy
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allow
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allowing
people
to have a work-life balance and putting proper security
aparatus
in Correct your spelling
apparatus
place
for people
.
It is a known fact that Individuals living in cities are so busy, and some do feel unsafe. Most of the times
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time
this
is because everybody has aspirations that they want to fulfil, such
as having more money, getting a bigger house and so on; leaving them with little or no time
to know their sorroundings
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surroundings
Furthermore
, the crime rate in metropolitan
area are higher than Add an article
the metropolitan
a metropolitan
countryside
, we see many occupants keeping to themselves and not interacting with Add an article
the countryside
people
around them. For instance
, I once had a neighbour, but I didn't know how he looked like until months later,
because he was working 2 jobs a day and would always lock himself inside his house because of Remove the comma
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security
. In a situation like this
, it is very hard to even get to know each other.
However
, having a proper work-life balance and a proper security
aparatus
available (Correct your spelling
apparatus
such
as a police patrol car) in the city would do wonders. When folks have a proper-structured work day
, they can close early and have enough Correct your spelling
workday
time
to see those around them. Also
seeing a
police parading the streets at any Remove the article
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time
of the day would give the residents a sense
of secturity
and thereby they can reach out to Correct your spelling
security
people
around them. For example
, I stay in a block of flats and I know my co-tenants because I close early and we have a security
guard in place
, this
way we have lots of time
to interact with each other. Having this
in place
,
can help residents reach out to each other.
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apply
Finally
, folks in metropolitan areas do not know those around them and don't have sense
of belonging. Add an article
a sense
This
essay has identified the problems such
as hectic work schedule and sense
of insecurity, also
it has identfied
the solutions Correct your spelling
identified
such
as having proper
work-life balance and having a proper Add an article
a proper
security
aparatus
in Correct your spelling
apparatus
place
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