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Some people think that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writings can be stored electronically whereas others think that printed books still play an important role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Recently, paperless
enviroment
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environment
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book
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books
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. Many of
contents
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the contents
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 are pushed to be available online. There
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 a
dicussion
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discussion
 that whether printed contents are still essential to people.
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 many people still prefer to use printed books, I believe
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digital
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 will replace all of the
preinted
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printed
presented
content
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 in the
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decade
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. Many people believe that
paper
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 is the best medium to send
long
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a long
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 message between a writer and a
reader
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. Since books are
the
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tangible
paper
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object
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, reading a book
give
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 a sense of touch which
favour
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is favour
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 by some readers. In
addiction
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addition
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, reading from
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 electronic device can damage
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eyesight
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eye sight
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. According to the
priciple
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principle
how
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 we see
a
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object
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,
light
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 particles reflect from
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object
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the object
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 to
human
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the human
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eye
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 to create the vision
a the
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 optical lens.
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,
eletronic
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electronic
devices
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 generate
light
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particals
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particles
,
then
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 the
particals
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particles
 go straight
froward
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forward
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 to our
eye
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. These can damage our
eye
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 because the generated
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have
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higher
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a higher
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 density than the normal event.
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, storing writing
contents
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content
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 electronically is
the
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a
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 sustainable method and many
of
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electronic
devices
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preserves
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preserve
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eye sight
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eyesight
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. Using
paper
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 in any case uses many natural
resource
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resources
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 and leaves
high
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 carbon footprint.
Stroing
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Storing
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 data in could reduce the pollution emission
campare
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compare
compared
 to the method of
stroring
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storing
 data in
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paper
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the paper
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.
Therefore
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, it is more s eco friendly.
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,
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last
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 decade, many
devices
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 have been designed to imitate how
human
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humans
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 see
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the object
an object
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object
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objects
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. The device will not generate any
light
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,
instead
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, it
use
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uses
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 conductors to induce a magnetic sheet to generate images or text. The
light
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 particles
reflects
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fron
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from
 the magnetic sheet,
then
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 we see the
content
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 on the device. To summarise, printed books are still popular recently.
Hoewever
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However
, the paperless concept will force all of the
content
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 to be digital in a few years. Printed
content
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 isn't
effiencient
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efficient
 way and it is not healthy
to
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 the world. Many
of
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developer
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developers
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 would see
this
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opputunity
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opportunity
 to transform conventional
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reader
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readers
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 to be e-book
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reader
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readers
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. In the soon
futurem
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future
 the electronic
devices
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 will be developed to minimize the drawback
from
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of
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 the
paper
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reader
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