You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Hi Jill, I hope you and the family are in the pink of health. I am writing
this
letter to give you some
inputs
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on learning driving. To start learning
driving
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is a good decision. Now you can apply for learning driving license till your driving lessons are not completed. It
an
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advantage to have
driving
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a driving
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license as you can use it
in
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abroad
also
for driving
purpose
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.
In addition
to that, Mathew
driving academy
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Driving Academy
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is a good option
to begin
learning
driving
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. They offer personalised classes, and they have
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a money
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money back
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guarantee.
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mean
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you don’t have to pay any fees to them if you have not learned
driving
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. Please make sure you learn all traffic signals
sign
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and rules. Please ask your trainer to
taught
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you about speeding and
overtake
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rules.
Also
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request him to teach you about parking rules.
This
will help you in navigating clogged roads. I hope you follow my advice and act on
them
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. Warm Wishes, Jay McGill
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language
Ensure proper use of articles such as 'a' or 'the'. For instance, 'It's an advantage to have a driving license' should be 'It's an advantage to have a driving license'.
language
Proofread your letter for minor grammatical errors and misplaced words. For example, 'In addition to that, Mathew driving academy is a good option' should be 'In addition to that, Mathew's Driving Academy is a good option'.
task
The letter addresses all parts of the task effectively: explaining why a driving license is advantageous, recommending a driving school, and offering extra tips.
tone
The greeting and closing are well-expressed, friendly, and suitable for the context of writing to a friend.
structure
The letter maintains a clear and logical structure, making it easy to follow.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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