You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Hi Jill, I hope you and the family are in the pink of health. I am writing

this

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letter to give you some

inputs

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input

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on learning driving. To start learning

driving

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to drive

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is a good decision. Now you can apply for learning driving license till your driving lessons are not completed. It

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is an

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advantage to have

driving

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a driving

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license as you can use it

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apply

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abroad

also

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for driving

purpose

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purposes

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In addition

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to that, Mathew

driving academy

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Driving Academy

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is a good option

to begin

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learning

driving

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to drive

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. They offer personalised classes, and they have

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a money

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money back

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money-back

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guarantee.

Its

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It's

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mean

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means

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you don’t have to pay any fees to them if you have not learned

driving

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to drive

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. Please make sure you learn all traffic signals

sign

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signs

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and rules. Please ask your trainer to

taught

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teach

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you about speeding and

overtake

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overtaking

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rules.

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Also

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request him to teach you about parking rules.

This

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will help you in navigating clogged roads. I hope you follow my advice and act on

them

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. Warm Wishes, Jay McGill

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Ensure proper use of articles such as 'a' or 'the'. For instance, 'It's an advantage to have a driving license' should be 'It's an advantage to have a driving license'.

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Proofread your letter for minor grammatical errors and misplaced words. For example, 'In addition to that, Mathew driving academy is a good option' should be 'In addition to that, Mathew's Driving Academy is a good option'.

task

The letter addresses all parts of the task effectively: explaining why a driving license is advantageous, recommending a driving school, and offering extra tips.

tone

The greeting and closing are well-expressed, friendly, and suitable for the context of writing to a friend.

structure

The letter maintains a clear and logical structure, making it easy to follow.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

164 words

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