You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Hi Jill,
I hope you and the family are in the pink of health. I am writing
this
letter to give you some inputs
on learning driving. To start learning Fix the agreement mistake
input
driving
is a good decision. Now you can apply for learning driving license till your driving lessons are not completed. It Change the verb form
to drive
an
advantage to have Add a missing verb
is an
driving
license as you can use it Correct article usage
a driving
in
abroad Change preposition
apply
also
for driving purpose
.
Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
In addition
to that, Mathew driving academy
is a good option Correct your spelling
Driving Academy
to begin
learning driving
. They offer personalised classes, and they have Change the verb form
to drive
Correct article usage
a money
money back
guarantee. Add a hyphen
money-back
Its
Replace the word
It's
It is
mean
you don’t have to pay any fees to them if you have not learned Correct subject-verb agreement
means
driving
.
Please make sure you learn all traffic signals Change the verb form
to drive
sign
and rules. Please ask your trainer to Fix the agreement mistake
signs
taught
you about speeding and Change the form of the verb
teach
overtake
rules. Change the form of the verb
overtaking
Also
request him to teach you about parking rules. Add a comma
Also,
This
will help you in navigating clogged roads.
I hope you follow my advice and act on them
.
Warm Wishes,
Jay McGillCorrect pronoun usage
it
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language
Ensure proper use of articles such as 'a' or 'the'. For instance, 'It's an advantage to have a driving license' should be 'It's an advantage to have a driving license'.
language
Proofread your letter for minor grammatical errors and misplaced words. For example, 'In addition to that, Mathew driving academy is a good option' should be 'In addition to that, Mathew's Driving Academy is a good option'.
task
The letter addresses all parts of the task effectively: explaining why a driving license is advantageous, recommending a driving school, and offering extra tips.
tone
The greeting and closing are well-expressed, friendly, and suitable for the context of writing to a friend.
structure
The letter maintains a clear and logical structure, making it easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite