You have recently noticed that your work computer is getting too slow and out-of-date. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain the problems with your computer -give some examples of how this has affected your work -make some suggestions for what can be done to help adress this issue

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to bring to your notice my task computer is getting too slow and it is not working properly. My name is XYZ and I am working in your LLC company about a salesman .recently my work computer not working good because it is getting to slow and I am face problems about

this

problem while I am changed the device

last

month company give me a new piece but it shows me same problem sometimes it is off automatically. It has a big effect on my work because

last

Sunday I was making a product list but it is off to automatically . I am so worried about it because I was spending more time making a product list but I am so late because I again starting

this

work. I hope you read my letter and reply to me soon and make some suggestions about it problem and you have done it

this

way early. Your Fatefully.

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

165 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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