Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people claim that
children
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from low-income
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are more ready to handle
adult
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life's
problems
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than those
children
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from wealthy
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. I agree with them for two reasons.
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of all,
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who grew up under poor
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acknowledge that earning is not easy so they can handle
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lifes'
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such
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as
money
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problems
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.
This
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is because they are more likely to witness their
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struggling with
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problems
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compared to
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from a wealthy family. For
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reason, it is less common for young individuals from low-income
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to spend
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on purchasing luxuries items that are overpriced because they understand how hard it is to earn
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.
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, when
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do not have a lot of
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, they often can not provide financial supports to their
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as much as wealthy
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could, so some of their
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start working early. Whether it is to support their
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or pay tuition, Working allows
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to gain many valuable experiences that prepare them for
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life.
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, they can learn ways to organize a busy schedule and budget wisely.
As a result
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,
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who have working experiences can handle stressful situations better than
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from wealthy
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and
moreover
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, become well prepared for many stress and
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in
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life. In conclusion, it is clear that
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who are brought up in a low-income family learn the value of
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and gain work experiences from a young age.
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, they are better prepared for issues that they will face as adults in the future than
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from a wealthy family.
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