You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear sir, I am waiting

this

letter bring into your notice about a job because you need an employee about baby responsibility.I need a job task because I spend my free time at the effort. My name is XYZ and I am living in Australia street 36 modal town. Recently I am complete my study and I send a resume to some company's but it is not replied to it. I am waiting to see the advertisement in an Australian magazine and you need baby care people. I am like

this

offer because I have experience of it . Actually, my sister has 2 children and she was living with me because she is working in an LLC company and after going job my sister I care for her children because I like her nephew. I would like

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for your baby because I am suitable for it because I know everything about a child. Now the time I am free because anyone owners do not reply to me about any work and now I would spend a free time about it. I hope you notice my letter and reply to me soon. Your Fatefully

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7 paragraphs

195 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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