Many people believe that social networking websites such as facebook and instagram, have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree?

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The line graph compares five influencers regarding their Instagram accounts popularity from 2018 to 2021. Overall, there is an increase in the figure of Instagram
followers
for all celebrities accounts over time. Whereas, Cristiano Ronaldo has the most popular
account
with the highest
number
of
followers
. In 2018, around 110
million
are followed the Cristiano
account
, which less than Selena Gomez
followers
by 20
million
. In 2021, the
number
of people who follow Cristiano increased significantly to around 300
million
,
however
, Selena
account
rose to 250
followers
, but still the
account
with the least
number
of
followers
. The
number
of
followers
for the Rock, Ariana and Kylie Jennifer is around the same in 2018. While the Rock
account
become popular and followed by more than 250
million
, both other accounts rise to almost 250
million
at the end of the period.
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