Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?
Every individual these days leads a busy lifestyle for one reason or another. And because of
this
people
do not have much time
to know the people
living in the close vicinity and this
is the reason why,
not many Remove the comma
apply
people
nowadays do not know their neighbours
very well. Not knowing or not having much interaction with people
living nearby could cause some social issues and these issues could be solved by taking some initiatives and steps.
First
and foremost reason why Correct article usage
The first
people
do not have any information about their neighbours
is they do not have any time
to do so. And human is a social animal
, since the very beginning, before the evolution of mankind- humans are used to socializing. The need of having a social life is so deep that a person could suffer from mental illnesses if he did not have anyone to socialize with for a very long Fix the agreement mistake
animals
time
. And this
has indeed resulted in increasing the mental sickness among people
in the cities
. According to the survey of 2015, the number of people
suffering from depression has shown a two-fold increase
in a decade due to less social life. And mkst
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most
people
out of the total number of people
lived in mega
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megacities
cities
of their respective nations. Another major problem less contact with neighbours
could cause is increase
in Correct article usage
an increase
crime
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the crime
rate
. Criminals are mostly found in large cities
as they get the benefit of being ambiguous. Their criminal activities
could very well go unnoticed since nobody has time
to care what others are doing in their neighborhood
. So, less communication with and knowledge of Change the spelling
neighbourhood
neighbours
cause mental suffering among people
and rise in criminal activities
.
As a
solution to the above-mentioned problem of suffering from brain diseases could be the organization of communal Change preposition
A
activities
. Such
activities
will give chance to people
know their neighbourhood better. Moreover
, people
could also
get the opportunity of socializing and interacting
with Wrong verb form
interact
people
they have among themselves. Talking to people
generally could help in releasing some of the mental stress that people
suffee
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suffer
due
hectic Add the preposition
todue
lifestyle
. Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
Hence
, this
could prove to be a beneficial way of improving mental
health of Add an article
the mental
people
. However
, the increase
in crime
rate
in large cities
could only be reduced if the law system of every city is effective enough to trace criminals. What I mean is that locals cannot keep track of their neighbours
every single move. It would be nearly impossible. What they, however
, could do is to have some basic information about their neighbours
and it is also
the moral duty of every citizen to report any suspicious activities
happening around them to the police, as this
could aid in reducing the crime
rate
to a great extent. Hence
, organization
of community Correct article usage
the organization
gathering
and effective Fix the agreement mistake
gatherings
law suit
for criminals could solve the problem of less socialization and increasing Correct your spelling
lawsuit
crime
ratio.
In conclusion, people
suffer from mental ailments if theu
do not have enough social life and crimes Correct your spelling
they
increase
too. These problems could be solved if people
themselves take initiative
of knowing their Add an article
the initiative
neighbours
and crime
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the crime
rate
could be reduced if neighbours
are vigilant enough to report any illegal activity that come
to their notice.Change the verb form
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