Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

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Every individual these days leads a busy lifestyle for one reason or another. And because of
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people
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do not have much
time
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to know the
people
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living in the close vicinity and
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is the reason why
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not many
people
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nowadays do not know their
neighbours
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very well. Not knowing or not having much interaction with
people
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living nearby could cause some social issues and these issues could be solved by taking some initiatives and steps.
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and foremost reason why
people
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do not have any information about their
neighbours
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is they do not have any
time
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to do so. And human is a social
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, since the very beginning, before the evolution of mankind- humans are used to socializing. The need of having a social life is so deep that a person could suffer from mental illnesses if he did not have anyone to socialize with for a very long
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. And
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has indeed resulted in increasing the mental sickness among
people
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in the
cities
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. According to the survey of 2015, the number of
people
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suffering from depression has shown a two-fold
increase
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in a decade due to less social life. And
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most
people
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out of the total number of
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lived in
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megacities
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cities
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of their respective nations. Another major problem less contact with
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could cause is
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increase
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in
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crime
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the crime
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rate
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. Criminals are mostly found in large
cities
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as they get the benefit of being ambiguous. Their criminal
activities
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could very well go unnoticed since nobody has
time
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to care what others are doing in their
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. So, less communication with and knowledge of
neighbours
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cause mental suffering among
people
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and rise in criminal
activities
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.
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solution to the above-mentioned problem of suffering from brain diseases could be the organization of communal
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.
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activities
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will give chance to
people
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know their neighbourhood better.
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,
people
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could
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get the opportunity of socializing and
interacting
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with
people
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they have among themselves. Talking to
people
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generally could help in releasing some of the mental stress that
people
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suffer
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hectic
lifestyle
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.
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could prove to be a beneficial way of improving
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health of
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, the
increase
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in
crime
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rate
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in large
cities
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could only be reduced if the law system of every city is effective enough to trace criminals. What I mean is that locals cannot keep track of their
neighbours
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every single move. It would be nearly impossible. What they,
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, could do is to have some basic information about their
neighbours
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and it is
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the moral duty of every citizen to report any suspicious
activities
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happening around them to the police, as
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could aid in reducing the
crime
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rate
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to a great extent.
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,
organization
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the organization
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of community
gathering
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gatherings
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and effective
law suit
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lawsuit
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for criminals could solve the problem of less socialization and increasing
crime
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ratio. In conclusion,
people
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suffer from mental ailments if
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they
do not have enough social life and crimes
increase
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too. These problems could be solved if
people
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themselves take
initiative
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the initiative
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of knowing their
neighbours
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and
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crime
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the crime
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rate
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could be reduced if
neighbours
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are vigilant enough to report any illegal activity that
come
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to their notice.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sense of community
  • isolation
  • loneliness
  • support network
  • sense of security
  • trust
  • cooperation
  • social support
  • integration
  • community events
  • shared spaces
  • neighborly interactions
  • neighborhood watch programs
  • community engagement
  • technology
  • connect
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