Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

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to interact with others, even they don't have any idea who lives
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door. The main reasons for
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issues are public have busy schedules and they
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, it can be addressed by increasing interaction and communication between the
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that life becomes very busy
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have no time for their love once. They are engaged to make their carer to get good opportunities in their life, nothing is wrong in it, they should know that other things are equally important in life like family and friends.
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, folks get happiness in their own ways like
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with friends on social media without meeting someone, they spend their valuable time with them. It can be solved by making more interaction and communication,
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should join function and organize events so,
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meet each other under a roof.
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off from their neighbours because of their hectic schedules, there are many possible ways which can help to get them closer and make their bond stronger
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sense of community
  • isolation
  • loneliness
  • support network
  • sense of security
  • trust
  • cooperation
  • social support
  • integration
  • community events
  • shared spaces
  • neighborly interactions
  • neighborhood watch programs
  • community engagement
  • technology
  • connect
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