Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Every individual these days leads a busy lifestyle for one reason or another. And because of
this
people
do not have much
time
to know the
people
living in the close vicinity and
this
is the reason why not many
people
nowadays know their
neighbours
very well. Not knowing or not having much interaction with
people
living nearby could cause some social issues and these issues could be solved by taking some initiatives and steps.
First
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and foremost reason why
people
do not have any information about their
neighbours
is they do not have any
time
. And humans are social animals, since the very beginning, before the evolution of mankind, humans are used to socializing. The need of having a social life is so deep that a person could suffer from mental illnesses if he did not have anyone to socialize with for a very long
time
. And
this
has indeed resulted in increasing the mental sickness among
people
in the
cities
. According to the survey of 2015, the number of
people
suffering from depression has shown a two-fold
increase
in a decade due to less social life. And most
people
out of the total number of
people
lived in
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cities
of their respective nations. Another major problem that less contact with
neighbours
could cause is an
increase
in the
crime
rate
. Criminals are mostly found in large
cities
as they get the benefit of being ambiguous. Their criminal
activities
could very well go unnoticed since nobody has
time
to care what others are doing in their
neighborhood
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. So, less communication with and knowledge of
neighbours
cause mental suffering among
people
and rise in criminal
activities
. A solution to the above-mentioned problem of suffering from brain diseases could be the organization of communal
activities
.
Such
activities
will give a chance to
people
to know their neighbourhood better.
Moreover
,
people
could
also
get the opportunity of socializing and
interacting
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with
people
they have among themselves. Talking to
people
generally could help in releasing some of the mental stress that
people
suffer due to
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lifestyle
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.
Hence
,
this
could prove to be a beneficial way of improving
mental
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health of
people
.
However
, the
increase
in the
crime
rate
in large
cities
could only be reduced if the law system of every city is effective enough to trace criminals. What I mean is that locals cannot keep track of their
neighbours
' every single move. It would be nearly impossible. What they,
however
, could do is to have some basic information about their
neighbours
and it is
also
the moral duty of every citizen to report any suspicious
activities
happening around them, to the police, as
this
could aid in reducing the
crime
rate
to a great extent.
Hence
,
organization
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of community gatherings and
effective
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an effective
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lawsuit
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lawsuits
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for criminals could solve the problem of less socialization and increasing
crime
ratio. In conclusion,
people
suffer from mental ailments if they do not have enough social life and crimes
increase
too. These problems could be solved if
people
themselves take
an
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initiative of knowing their
neighbours
and
crime
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rate
could be reduced if
neighbours
are vigilant enough to report any illegal activity that
come
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to their notice.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sense of community
  • isolation
  • loneliness
  • support network
  • sense of security
  • trust
  • cooperation
  • social support
  • integration
  • community events
  • shared spaces
  • neighborly interactions
  • neighborhood watch programs
  • community engagement
  • technology
  • connect
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