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In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. What's the situation like in your country? What do yout think are the advantages and disvanatges of doing part-time job?

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Having a job and a regular income help people with living independently and meeting their basic needs. Adolescents are no exception. In several countries, parents and authorities stimulate teenagers to take part in part-time jobs. There are both pros and cons to
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teenagers
 who work part-time in the working environment, gain insight into the
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adult life and
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 understanding of the real world. These help them develop a sense of responsibility from an early age and learn to carry out their duties
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Therefore
, they will be able to find a job more easily in
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 and, in turn, are more likely to climb the career ladder.
On the other hand
, being involved in part-time jobs leaves teenagers with little time to do their homework.
Consequently
, they are likely to fail to get high scores and graduate from school with flying
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.
As a result
, they will not be allowed to enter prestigious universities and will miss out on obtaining higher qualifications.
Furthermore
, they might work in an unpleasant working atmosphere with some
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 and antagonistic colleagues.
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, their jobs will adversely influence
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their levels of mental health,
therefore
, they are unable to focus on their lessons efficiently. In my country, Iran, due to financial obligations and dealing with
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huge inflation, teenagers are compelled to work on a regular basis to cater for their basic needs and sometimes they are the breadwinners in their families. Overall, notwithstanding the fact that having a part-time occupation might have some benefits, I believe,
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 drawbacks have detrimental effects on teenagers’ education and yield more negative results.
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