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Nowadays scientists and tourists can travel to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of this development?

#scientists #tourists #travel #environments #pole #development
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 secluded natural environments has been no longer out of reach for scientists and tourists in
this
 technologically pervasive world. While I concede
this
 adventure travel is of multiple values, there are many risks attached to it. On the one hand, there are irrefutably several reasons why exploring exotic areas on Earth is a worthwhile experience. The purpose of gaining knowledge is evidently a major advantage. Specifically, individuals will not only enhance their awareness of different subjects,
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 but
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 understanding of our planet.
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, many areas may contain potential resources, which will be of tremendous use in improving human's living standards. Indeed, the exploration of the Amazon forest
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 triggered the discovery of herbal medicines that could cure many diseases.
Nevertheless
, the hazards involved in embarking on
such
 exquisite trips could hardly be overlooked.
Firstly
, mass tourism might take a toll on regional flora and fauna.
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activities from excessive hordes of tourists,
such
 as littering, would likely wreck their living environments.
Furthermore
, some special locations are widely known for extreme weather conditions. The South Pole,
for example
, is proven to have one of the most severe climates on Earth, with temperatures falling below zero degrees throughout the year. These places are,
therefore
, merely advisable for those with great strength and high endurance,
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 serious health problems are unavoidable. In conclusion,
although
 discovering novel regions is clearly desirable in some aspects, it is my view that the perils are more discouraging.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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