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motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. what are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

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In the era of urbanisation, motor transports have solved the problem of travelling long paths.Nowadays, it is so convenient to
travel
 extensive routes because of the progress of
this
 development.
On the other hand
, there
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also
 some complications related to it but they can be tackled. The following paragraphs will describe the difficulties and their quick fix.
To begin
 with, in
this
 technological era,there are so many modes of transport available that one can
travel
 from one city to another for their jobs or studies on a
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daily-basis
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. People do not need to migrate which is expensive as compared to travelling.There are different modes of transport available. Folks can
travel
 overseas as well.They are not bounded to
travel
 only to their home countries.Folks can meet their families who live abroad. The motor vehicles took less time as compared to bicycles. It saves travelling time for commuters. On the
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contrary side, to execute transportation it needs lots of money and place.
For instance
, it requires lots of assets. For that in some ,places they have to cut trees to make roads which are inclining toward deforestation.
Moreover
, these engine vehicles create pollutions which is dangerous to health. It leads to diseases like asthma and many more skin diseases. To run these engines requires lots of oils and which can only be extracted in that way it is affecting vegetation of that areas. To solve
this
 problem, individuals need to contribute
first
.For short ,distances they should avoid these transits.They can share rides so that fewer motorways on roads and less pollution.
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