Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?
It is undeniable that
althought
there are a lot of gyms or Correct your spelling
although
sports
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centers
nowadays, Change the spelling
centres
people
often spend Use synonyms
much
time Correct quantifier usage
a lot of
on
sitting or working in their house or office. Change preposition
apply
This
habit could lead to many troubles Linking Words
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in
people
's Use synonyms
lifestyle
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lifestyles
This
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it and give some possible solutions to deal with.
On the one hand, a sedentary lifestyle would make Remove the preposition
apply
people
face up Use synonyms
with
a host of health Change preposition
apply
problems
. One of the major issues related to Use synonyms
this
is that Linking Words
people
could probably be Use synonyms
obesity
if they stay still in one place for Replace the word
obese
long
time and do less exercise every day. BecauseChange the article
a long
,
sitting or sleeping often burn fewer calories. Remove the comma
apply
As a result
, they could become overweight easily and quickly. Linking Words
For instance
, some office workers who do not play any Linking Words
sports
often look fatter than Use synonyms
someone
who Correct pronoun usage
those
do
labour jobs Change the verb form
does
such
as waiters, farmers. Another serious problem is that Linking Words
people
might be exhausted or meet backbone Use synonyms
problems
. As if they have to work and look at the computer for many hours, they might be frustrated and tired.
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On the other hand
, there are several viable solutions to cope with these Linking Words
problems
. Use synonyms
To begin
with, each company could encourage their employees to do more exercise by setting some Linking Words
sport
facilities in the company or organising Change the noun form
sports
sports
competitions. Use synonyms
Thus
, workers might have more motivation to play Linking Words
sports
. Another feasible solution to Use synonyms
this
problem would be for family members to remind each other to do physical activities frequently. Linking Words
For example
, they could go for a walk together after dinner.
To sum up, there Linking Words
are
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is
a great deal of
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a lot of
many
plenty of
problems
when Use synonyms
people
have a sitting habit for Use synonyms
long
time including being overweight or backhead, Add an article
a long
as a result
, Linking Words
people
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shoud
do more exercise by encouraging each other to play Correct your spelling
should
sports
in the company or at home.Use synonyms
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