some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

some people state that the main environmental problem of

current

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time is the deforestation and reduction of specific

animals

. On the other

hand

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there are more

factors

which cause environmental issues like soil degradation, air

pollution

and

water

pollution

. Both views of these statements are discussed in the

concecutive

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consecutive

paragraphs. The main causes of deforestation are wood harvesting and

insfratructure

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infrastructure

expansion

such

as road, building and urbanization.

Similarly

, due to

increase

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in radiation and

because of

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apply

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deforestation,

animals

are suffering

with

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from

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lack

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a lack

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of food resources and shelters. These are the main causes for

extinction

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the extinction

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of

animals

. The repercussions of wood harvesting and

insfratructure

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infrastructure

expansion are increased because the usage of fuel and charcoal have been increasing

day

by

day

. the necessity of fuel is been increasing due to

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increase in population and transportation. Significantly,

infratructure

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infrastructure

is expanding

becuase

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because

in current generation everyone

are

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more keen

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to lead nuclear families and usage of

aminities

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amenities

. So

construction

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the construction

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of buildings

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are

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pitfall

now a days

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nowadays

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. So, road

extenction

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extinction

are been widely increased.

Secondly

, soil erosion, air

pollution

and reduction of

water

are

also

the

factors

of environmental issues. The

occurance

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occurrence

of these

factors

are

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drastical

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drastically

drastic

increase in mining and

pollution

.

The mining

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is rapidly been increased due to

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construction

contruction

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of dams and for any commercial spaces. Simultaneously, land area is getting deduced.

Moreover

,

pollution

is

increased

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day

by

day

because of heavy transportation and gases emitted from factories, which contaminate air and

water

.

occurence

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occurrence

of

water

contamination may lead to

decrease

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in

healty

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healthy

health

plants. To conclude, in my opinion, the loss of specific plants and

animals

are the main reason for environmental problems but as mentioned in the above passage, there are several minor

factors

which

also

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effect

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affect

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environment

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the environment

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and create problems.