Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while other think that it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with discuss both options.

There are some humans who believe that one of the appropriate hobbies for
children
are
pets
despite that some have the opposite view, i.e. living with
pets
makes some health problems which are disastrous. In
this
essay, I will analyse the two mentioned opinions and I disagree with keeping
pets
to a great extent. On one hand, without a doubt, most of the
children
would like to be owners of lovely
animals
such
as dogs, chickens, cats, donkeys and things like that.
Therefore
, parents prefer to let
children
keep
pets
in their homes in order to make their
children
happy.
Moreover
, parents want to teach their
children
to care for wildlife.
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hunters kill lovely
animals
and use them in different industries.
On the other hand
, after passing a time,
children
emotionally depend on their
pets
, so if they become sick or their
animals
die out, they will definitely get depressed.
Furthermore
,
pets
have some health problems which make humans ill that
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compensate hurts.
For instance
, the dog of my friend had an unknown disease that makes her ill. In fact, she got a bad fever and face a lot of serious problems. Because some
pets
have not been vaccinated due to the fact that yet there is not a known cure for them. In conclusion, there are two different views about keeping
animals
, the
first
is they are good for
children
and the other is they are dangerous for
children
's health.
However
, from my point of ,
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view they are completely so dangerous and we must keep
children
away from
pets
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • companion
  • responsibility
  • care
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • social skills
  • transmit
  • diseases
  • allergies
  • safety risks
  • time
  • effort
  • money
  • mature
  • handle
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