Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while other think that it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with discuss both options.

There are some humans who believe that one of the appropriate hobbies for

children

are

pets

despite that some have the opposite view, i.e. living with

pets

makes some health problems which are disastrous. In

this

essay, I will analyse the two mentioned opinions and I disagree with keeping

pets

to a great extent. On one hand, without a doubt, most of the

children

would like to be owners of lovely

animals

such

as dogs, chickens, cats, donkeys and things like that.

Therefore

, parents prefer to let

children

keep

pets

in their homes in order to make their

children

happy.

Moreover

, parents want to teach their

children

to care for wildlife.

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hunters kill lovely

animals

and use them in different industries.

On the other hand

, after passing a time,

children

emotionally depend on their

pets

, so if they become sick or their

animals

die out, they will definitely get depressed.

Furthermore

,

pets

have some health problems which make humans ill that

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compensate hurts.

For instance

, the dog of my friend had an unknown disease that makes her ill. In fact, she got a bad fever and face a lot of serious problems. Because some

pets

have not been vaccinated due to the fact that yet there is not a known cure for them. In conclusion, there are two different views about keeping

animals

, the

first

is they are good for

children

and the other is they are dangerous for

children

's health.

However

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view they are completely so dangerous and we must keep

children

away from

pets

.