Humans are basically selfish. Write a paragraph about 300 words to state that whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Include examples and illustrations to support your viewpoint.

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there is no doubt that individuals think about only themselves in
this
era. people are much concerned with what they eat, wear and their future without considering other members interests. most of the population argue that individuals are self-centred and
others
argue that they are not. I agree with the opinion that, humans are selfish and they will want everything for themselves. why do I say
this
?
firstly
, many people want everything for themselves alone.
for example
, most politicians in
this
era spend the country's money on their properties alone without considering the health status, educational and infrastructural development in their countries.
however
, it is not only related to the politicians, most businesses are collapsing due to the bad attitude of the workers. these days, hardly do society works wholeheartedly. they mostly work for their self-interest.
such
attitude is very vexing and it is destroying most of our companies.
secondly
, the crowd hates to see other people progressing. illustrate, in most African countries, many families are being separated due to
this
same issue. every parent wants their children to progress better than the other
hence
, leading to the killing of innocent souls.
moreover
, many youths these days go for money rituals because they want to have bigger houses and cars. in conclusion, the public craves money, houses and cars for themselves alone without considering the dangers that could arise. individuals must learn to share what they have with
others
and they must do unto
others
as they want
others
to do unto them.
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