The increased world demand for oil in gas has made it necessary for locating these resources in remote and untouched natural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging these nature areas?

Nowadays, in our contemporary societies, the need for oil and gas has become increasingly significant. Some believe that it could be beneficial to search these precious natural resources by drilling in background areas, whereas

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take it in

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opposite manner. I believe

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surpass the drawbacks of drilling. The points to bolster my opinion will

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in the subsequent paragraphs. Myriad underlying assets could be attributed

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trend, one of the main positives is that it could be helpful to lower

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prices

. It goes without saying that if there is more drilling, there will be more supplies, what I mean by

this

is that

people

will

ultimetly

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ultimately

enjoy more gasoline at lower

prices

. Another advantage of

this

phenomenon is that it would lower the

prices

of basic amenities of life. When

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prices

go up,

then

it affects the

prices

of everything

such

as food and clothes because everything comes from long distance and that’s transportation. Three is ample evidence from

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that

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fuel

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prices

play a pivotal role in our daily life. Another striking

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benefit

in

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regard is that It would be the reason to

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more jobs. because the process of drilling needs

people

and

equipments

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.

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, the town of

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Saskatchewan

was aline

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because of cold weather. But since

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,

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discovery of oil and gas, the demand for

people

has been increasingly growing.

Nevertheless

, I would not

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overlook

overlooked

the

otherwise

too. drilling has certain disadvantages.

First

of all,

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will increase air pollution. To elaborate,

People

used heavy machinery for drilling

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types of machinery emit harmful gases; which pollute our environment and eventually make

people

sick.

In addition

to that, drilling often disrupts the ecological environment of these particular areas by the use of

such

powerful

equipments

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. When an individual use

this

machine, the living habitat suffered a lot and moved to other parts of the world. To conclude,

although

drilling has certain damage like

airpollution

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air pollution

&

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disrupt

disrupts

ecological environment. My opinion on

this

is optimistic because It has an

extrenly

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extremely

positive impact on the growth of any country.

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benefits of drilling in new untouched areas outweigh its drawbacks.