Write a letter to your friend who is starting an import/export business and asked you for recommendation for a product from your own country. In the letter, you should: - what the product will be - from which region of your country where it came from - why it is a good product to export.

Hello James, How are you doing? I learned from Tunde that you are starting an import and export business, that's really impressive I must say; it takes

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of guts to step out into something like that. From my side, I would suggest you go into charcoal exportation. In Nigeria, we have

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of charcoal produced in large

quantity

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in the

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region of the country, and

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is because we have

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of trees there. These trees are burnt, but not totally,

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they are processed and packaged into bags for

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shipment.

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apply

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charcoal is

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seasonal produce, In a way, I would still say it is a good product for export because it is used for heating purposes during

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, lovers of barbecue will be in dire need of

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charcoal.

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, we have so many people that love to grill, you can sell it to them. In all, you have quite a lot of customers out there and

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of profit to make too. So what are you waiting for? Let me know if you need any other information and I will get them for you. Do take care now. Best wishes, Rotimi

rotimiolajitan

Dec 7, 2021

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