In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is positive trend?
As can be seen, shopping was a daily domestic thing in the past.
However
, many people
think that shopping is a kind of hobby
. I strongly agree that considering shopping as a hobby
is a positive trend. The reasons will be explained in the following paragraph before the conclusion is reached.
First
of all, shopping is a positive trend as it is a kind of entertainment. When you shop, you are physically active by walking, going up and down escalators, and trying on clothes. Moreover
, buying things for others can also
help people
form healthy relationships. For example
, grandparents can bond with their grandchildren by purchasing new toys for them. This
connection can make them happier because they feel closer to their family.
Moreover
, shopping can boost one's health. Nowadays, we mostly spend our hobby
playing computer games or social media. However
, going shopping would be a better hobby
for us as we can exercise more by walking and relaxing our eyesight. According to research from a top university, it said that people
who spend more time on electronic devices will have a lower life expectancy than people
who spend more time walking. Moreover
, a recent article in The Daily Telegraph newspaper in Britain revealed that walking and carrying shopping bags can burn off 385 calories in a week.
In conclusion, shopping is a hobby
that is
a positive trend as it cannot only make people
gain more experience in selecting products they like,
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also
be good for your physical health.Submitted by chansatid on
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