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A museum is near your home looking for people to do part time unpaid work. You would like to do some unpaid work at the museum Write a letter to the museum director to apply.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Wendy Nguyen and I am writing to you to express my interest in the part-time voluntary job as advertised
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 the museum website on 25th May. The reason why I want to apply to
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 job is that I have seen the impressive historical images and documents about Vietnamese wars in your museum. I believe the position will give me the chance to study more about Vietnamese history. I had one-year
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 as a library keeper, so I can clearly instruct
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tourists.
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 job. I have enclosed my references in the attack These days, I can take full part-time mornings during weekdays, and on weekends I am full-time available. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Wendy Nguyen
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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