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Universities should enrol equal numbers of male and female students in all subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

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The idea that
universities
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 should receive an equal amount of
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 in each course is a frequent topic of discussion.
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 essay disagrees with
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 idea completely because it reduces academic competition and increases
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 discrimination.
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 with,
universities
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 should consider students based on their abilities and profiles. Limiting application by
gender
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 will make qualifying conditions unfair for some people that have high potential. Each person has different strengths, weaknesses, attitudes, skills. These factors should be considered rather than their physical.
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, in computer programming, men usually perform better than women and have a higher chance to be programmers in the future. Forcing a number of
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 to be equal might reduce the number of quality programmers that the
universities
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 can produce yearly.
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, equalization of
gender
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 doesn't give positive goodness to
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,
instead
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, it provokes inequality of
genders
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. Recently,
genders
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 are not classified only as male and female. There are other types of
genders
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 that should be accepted
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 as LGBTQ. Classification of male and female will leave a question to other
genders
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 and can misguide to an intention of
gender
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 discrimination from the university. In conclusion,
universities
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 should not use
gender
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 as a factor to
enroll
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 students in all subjects because it will not qualify the most suitable person to study in a subject and it can create misunderstanding of
gender
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 perspective from the university. In my opinion,
universities
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 are academic providers. The provider should focus only on developing the potential of a student. There is no evidence proving that
gender
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 is related to academic excellence.
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, they should not make the number of males and females equal in all subjects.ควย

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • stereotypes
  • workforce
  • discrimination
  • gender biases
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • humanities
  • underrepresentation
  • meritocracy
  • quotas
  • academic standards
  • qualifications
  • personal interest
  • enforced gender parity
  • dropout rates
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