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It is argued that the rich should pay higher taxes to be spent on Medicare programs. What is your opinion?

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There is an argument about whether the rich should pay higher
taxes
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 to be spent on
Medicare
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programs
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 or not.
Although
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 paying extra
taxes
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 by the rich could help the
governments
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 to improve
Medicare
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programs
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, the
governments
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 can encourage the rich to pay more
taxes
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 voluntary. I believe, if paying extra
taxes
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 becomes optional to the rich, it will be better. If wealthy
people
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 pay more
taxes
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 for
Medicare
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programs
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, there will be more resources available to the Establishments to improve medical infrastructures in the society. Paying tax is a social responsibility to everyone;
moreover
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, it is a must for
people
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 who work. All across the globe, those who have more income must pay more tax;
thus
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 it is clear that by these extra
taxes
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 the
governments
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 can do more things about
Medicare
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programs
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.
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, human health is one of the most important matters which must be taken considered by both the
governments
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 and
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society and by working more on
Medicare
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programs
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it
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may help the society to have a higher medical service.
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, in my fatherland Iran, there are many
people
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 who are confronted with financial problems and they can not even pay for their health insurance which may lead them to have problems in older ages for medical costs.
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, the higher
taxes
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 paid by the rich can help all
people
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.
On the other hand
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, if the Establishments encourage the rich to pay more
taxes
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, it would be more beneficial. It is clear that everything
that is
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 done by pleasure will have better effects on others and others will become encouraged to continue that manner.
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, if someone does not want to do something, he or she will find a way to escape from it but if they are convinced that the work will be beneficial, it is more likely to be done by them. All things considered, there is an argument among
people
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 about paying more
taxes
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 by the rich to be spent on
Medicare
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programs
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. Though paying more
taxes
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 can give the
governments
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 more resources to spend on
Medicare
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programs
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, it would be more beneficial if the Establishments encourage the rich to pay higher
taxes
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 rather than making them do it.

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