Write about the following topic. Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The subject of showing famous community on the news is creating a debate between the public. Some think it is a violation for privacy
however
, others say that well-known persons should afford the cost of their stardom by paying time from their personal life. In my opinion, popular society should be often given some solitude by all. On the
first
side of view, celebrated folk suffer on daily basis from lack of privacy. Actually, journalists tend to follow a celebrity to his house, to his workplace and to public spaces in plan to collect some shocking truth for the public.
For instance
, many crowds may prefer to buy a magazine or a journal with a headline about someone who is considered a perfect ideal to them.
In addition
, many social video creators are exposing some hilarious or insulting materials in form to make some profits without considering the feelings or the opinions of the star: subject of these materials. Many influencers are gaining more fame by using others' failures on a virtual platform
such
as Facebook, Instagram, and YouTube. On the flip side, famous persons are using their individual
activities
in line to expand their popularity. Currently, the development of social publishing helped many young celebrities to show their daily
activities
, and their followers are more attached to their content.
For example
, Cristiano Ronaldo is a great football player who was able to show us his habits outside the pitch in an amazing way.
Moreover
, some famous personalities make use of television for their real life shows
such
as the Kardashian family and Opera.
However
, it is important for me that everyone gets their free space. In fact, both famous and ordinary people prefer to have some solitary life in order to flee from depression and anxiety.
Activities
such
as bushwalk, a vacation in a water villa at the beach or hunting in a wild forest. In plus, being followed all the time will increase the sense of personal insecurity. It is
also
crucial to have the right to feel safe in their basic environments: their home, their workplace, and their neighbor. In conclusion, the society and the government can’t forbid the media from doing their job by tracking celebrities’ steps. But they must organize the medias’
activities
in a very convenient way for the famous people in order to let them enjoy a small personal space.
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