The government should lower the budget on the arts in order to allocate more money to education. To what extent do you agree?

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echnology

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society,

education

seems to be the most important aspect to be focused.

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Therefore

, there are many arguments between the problem that the

government

should save money to develop

education

instead

of

arts

. Even though I certainly disagree with

this

opinion, I

also

understand why some people have

this

thinking. On one hand, the reasons for which they give to lower the budget on the

arts

are seemingly reasonable.

Firstly

, lowering the expenses on the

arts

is the way t

o

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the

government

i

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the quality of facilities in schools. Since humans think that art is redundant in society, they consider

arts

as entertainment methods, do not play an important role in their lives or even the economy.

On the contrary

,

education

requires many new e

quipments

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to support t

o t

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eaching. Due to the d

eveloping

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of technology, there must be some new innovations in the way of transmission of knowledge.

In addition

, some productive and r

evenue generating

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skills

such

as programming,.. need p

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to students to prepare for their future. Following these reasons, the spending in

arts

should be lower to invest in

education

by

g

overnment.

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On the other hand

, I am i

n

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the opposite side of

this

agreement. There are many benefits that the

arts

bring to our life.

Firstly

,

arts

, in any a

spects,

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are the methods for dwellers to relax, to release their stress after working i

n

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a long period. By investing in

arts

,

g

overnment

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can encourage residents to encourage people who are keen on

arts

to gage in art, pursue a career too. E

very one

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knows that

education

is crucial,

however

, but for

arts

, students may feel extremely s

tressful

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after learning for a day.

Moreover

,

arts

is not only an entertainment production but

also

a new source for students to collect knowledge about our culture, to support their schooling.

Finally

,

g

overnment

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should invest in

arts

due to the best way to preserve tradition and culture. To draw a conclusion, despite m

any

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benefits that

education

brings to our life,

arts

is

also

an important aspect that we cannot deny.

Government

should balance the expenditure i

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both art and

education

, it will help the country to grow comprehensively.