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Many people believe that Zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos brings.

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In recent years, visiting
Zoos
 seems to become less popular than before. Some
people
 claimed that
Zoos
 are useless and should be closed. In
this
 essay, we will discuss the issue that brings from
Zoos
.
To begin
,
animals
 that stay in
Zoos
 are losing their freedom of life. Wild
animals
 should not be trapped in certain areas as they should enjoy the natural world.
For instance
, they have to stay at an amount of size area which is smaller than outside forest. Even if the
Zoos
 try to act like a natural atmosphere, it is difficult to provide an actual landscape for
animals
.
Moreover
, there is less competition between the different
animals
 while they no need to find the food by themselves. The
Zoos
 administrator will prepare food for different species and it will lead to the loss of their gifted ability.
Furthermore
, It is not fair to the
animals
.
Animals
 should have the right to live in nature. No one wants to become entertainment tools to serve anyone.
In addition
, the
people
 are willing to travel to other countries during their holidays, especially the low-developed countries like Thailand or Africa.
People
 can visit the real forest or rainforest to see the wild
animals
 rather than visiting
Zoos
. They can enjoy more different experiences outside and see more different species as
Zoos
 have limited kinds of
animals
 inside. In conclusion,
Zoos
 will bring the happy to
people
 in the past.
However
, there are many negative influences brought by
Zoos
.
People
 should consider closing it.
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