Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Hi Tope, I am so excited that you could reach out to me concerning where you could stay at the University of Ibadan. Lest
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forget, congratulations on your offer of admission, I know you will do brilliantly well. Getting a place to stay at the university could be quite challenging,
however
, it isn'
t
impossible. While there, I stayed at the Independence
hall
of residence. It was quite a nasty place with dirty toilets and bathrooms, I wouldn'
t
recommend you to take up a place there. So, if you are looking for accommodation, I would suggest you start early. As follows: you need to conclude your registration early, pay for your accommodation,
then
find a way to meet with the
hall
warden. After
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these, make sure you get to know the
hall
's executive members, they will give you the proper
guidiance
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guidance
that is
appropriate for you. As much as possible, don'
t
panic! When you panic, you might run into some fraudulent staff of the
hall
and they will swindle you of your money.
Also
, don'
t
go for the
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, it's always dirty.
Finally
, make sure you choose a room in a secured environment in order to avoid your properties from being stolen. Well, I think that's all for now. Do let me know if there you need any other information. Take care and have a lovely day ahead. Best wishes, Rotimi
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