You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your senior director. In your letter ● apologise for what happened ● explain why you missed the deadline ● tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

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Dear Greg, I am writing to you concerning the issue that happened recently,

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of one of our important clients. I accept responsibility for what happened because it was due to my late project delivery. I want you to know that I am so sorry for what has happened, it wasn't intentional. As much as I would've loved to give excuses to exonerate myself, I don't see it flying, so I just want to tell you once again that I am sorry. To be honest with you, I was in

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meeting where the deadline was fixed. What I thought was set as the deadline was 24th November, not knowing it was 24th October. So, I had set my target for November 24th;

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, once I realised it was

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of November, I tried all I could, but it was too late. From my side, I have learned a way to avoid

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kind of situation. One of the things that I will do is to make sure I give a periodic report to my manager, to let him know the state of things.

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any given target and be aligned with the outcomes of our meetings. I do hope I could change the situation, but I can't. For now, I will work on the needed changes and adhere to any instructions given to me. My apologies once again and have a good day. Yours sincerely, Rotimi

rotimiolajitanThu Dec 09 2021

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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247 words

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You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your senior director. In your letter ● apologise for what happened ● explain why you missed the deadline ● tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

many students are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force they to learn foreign languages. Do you extent agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. what problems could this situation cause? what solutions you can suggest?