Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading Magazines or watching TV.Why do they do this? . Do you think it is a good idea to famous people.

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their's famous role model
celebrities
behaviour and style where watching
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interviews
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people who
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describe detail in the following reasons. Nowadays, common people and
celebrities
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technology
such
as social media. The population always adheres
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person attitude and way of style because
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they can easily
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passionate
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Tamilnadu state of India, a plethora
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can
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imitate
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celebrities
not only
they
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do in any events but
also
their entire life they can
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and wear
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like their's
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cinema
heros namely, the
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actor MGR. The
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public
likes to copying to their's
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heroes
and they feel like a hero that's why they are
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.
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is a good idea for famous persons when
common
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population follows
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their's
habit
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and style.
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is one kind of promotion and free advertising who well- known man in order
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they can be famous their entire life.
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women
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adhere to their's
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good
thing
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like helping
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society.
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tamil
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actor
who
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Mr Vijay's fan does many helps for poor human
such
as free new cloths, foods, groceries, school stationeries, especially the pandemic situation they helped a lot. Undoubtedly, they can follow
this
kind of good thing from actor Vijay, the fans certainly
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mansions
mentions
to their's
celebrities
name when they aid to others while
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is a free
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advertising
for well- known man. To conclude, more and more
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public
copies to their's
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models and they can like to
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this
, not only
likes
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normal woman but
also
the
celebrities
too.
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,
this
is a good idea
to
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famous
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a famous
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person
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in many ways. I hope
this
process is conducive to motivating
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helping
thoughts to others.
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