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Dear Ronny, Thank you for your letter,
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am glad you are going to earn
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a gorgeous
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experience
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your Russia trip. My favourite season is summer
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because
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is the only season
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can see grass
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snow layer. During summer
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i'm
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probably going
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a little trip to Germany or Finland. If
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will not reach Finland or Germany
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am
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thinking about Italy or some of
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russian
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cities. About your uncle, what's his name? Why he
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to visit you? And what is he planning to do with you? Hope
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have answered your questions,
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will wait for your answer. Yours, Dimebag.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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