In different territories, younger students are pursuing part time jobs and it is on debate that may it have a positive and negative influence on students.
In different territories, younger students are pursuing
part
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part-time
time
jobs
and it is on debate
that may it have a positive and negative influence on students. In our nation Add an article
the debate
a debate
teenagers
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,teenagers
they
don’t necessarily contribute Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
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to
part
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part-time
time
jobs
, instead
they continue to study Add a comma
,instead
further
.
To begin
with
positive points, doing temporary Add a comma
,with
jobs
can make an individual independent. Like, each student can manage their own wages and can also
be a part
of financial support to their family. Additionally
, participating in irregular jobs
can benefits
a teenager with Change the verb form
benefit
work
experience and it may help them with various knowledge about different work
fields. For example
, my cousin is pursuing his degree with a job, so it has made him more self-sufficient and is helping his family with monetary support.
On the other hand
, doing half time
jobs
have a negative effect on the personal life of an individual. As frequent involvement in part
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part-time
time
work
can affect the educational background of a teenager. There are several problems that they may face like time
management and health issue. For instance
, if a person is occupying
with abundant Wrong verb form
occupied
of
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apply
work
, related to his education and job then
he may face a
difficulty Correct article usage
apply
to manage
it which can cause him stress and unhappiness. Change the verb form
managing
Therefore
, irregular
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the irregular
task
can produce a lack of self-Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
time
which may lead to a
pressure Remove the article
apply
in
oneself.
To conclude, doing Change preposition
on
part
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part-time
time
job are beneficial in terms of self-independence and awareness, while it also
has negative
effect like it can harm Add an article
a negative
the negative
a
mental health of a person.Remove the article
apply
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