You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter, say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with reference to your article on the striking resemblance among the town centres in my country. When it comes to development in the modern era it is true
on the contrary
there are plenty of traditional and historical architecture that depict totally different pictures. Let me explain in more detail.
For instance
, Lahore is a versatile city where on the one hand main boulevard is designed by renowned architects whole area is well planned with modern and spacious infrastructure, highly secured, and has a lovely ambience.
On the other hand
walled city was developed from the 11th to 18th centuries construction here gives perspective about different cultures throughout history and serves as a great tourist attraction for those who love archaeology.
Therefore
, I would like to set a meeting with you with some of my friends to fix a date to give you a guided tour through the city
then
you will be in a better position to depict the whole story. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ben John
Submitted by Haris Khan on

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Ensure that the flow from one paragraph to the next is smooth and logical. Use cohesive devices appropriately to connect ideas and paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
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Adequately address all components of the task, making sure to give a full response to each point.
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