Q - Heredity and environment play vital role in the development of personality of the individual. We can not separate them into water-tight compartments as both are interconnected. What extent do you agree with the statement?
Overall development of an
individual’s
is extremely important. Genetic characteristics and surrounding environment Change the noun form
individuals
individual
works
hand in hand while developing one’s personality. I do not agree with Change the verb form
work
above
statement and throw some Add an article
the above
lights
on the same.
It is true that some people are gifted with some innate qualities. But there are many instances where it has been proved that Fix the agreement mistake
light
self reliance
is more important than god gifted talent or genetically pass on characteristics. If the work is done with self believe success rates are higher. Add a hyphen
self-reliance
Also
hereditary habits can be changed with help of evaluations which will not only introspect the person but Add a comma
,Also
also
encourage an individual becoming
a better human being. Change the verb form
to become
Moreover
, humans have an ability to adapt qualities from others which make them more flexible and allows them to acquire new skill
as well as get rid of something if they don’t like in their overall personality. Fix the agreement mistake
skills
Hence
, transformation is possible through adaptability.
Surroundings play a crucial role in upbringing
Correct article usage
the upbringing
a
child. Change preposition
of a
However
, this
is not completely true. In my view
parents role is more imperative in the development of an individual. Add a comma
,view
Majority
of parents are unable to provide Correct article usage
The majority
desired
domain for their children and teenagers and they are setting Add an article
a desired
benchmark
not only in India but across the globe. Fix the agreement mistake
benchmarks
For instance
, in my country, Bihar is one of the provinces where domestic violence cases and poverty rates are highest over the country. Besides
that majority of student
have been living and studying in Fix the agreement mistake
students
such
chaotic conditions from Bihar crack their civil services exam instead
metropolitan
population. Sch exemplary student indicates that even if you ideal environment Change preposition
of metropolitan
then
one should not give up and keep striving can change any unwilling conditions which can help in transformation
of an individual.
In conclusion, Genetics attributes can be helpful in features like height and complexion, but I believe that personality development has nothing to with that. Everyone is different and develop their persona on their own as per their choice.Add an article
the transformation
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